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Commentary on Published Pieces

Commentary on “A Microsome of Married Life: The Grocery List” by JB Bilbery from TBP 2019

Posted on January 3, 2021March 13, 2025 By Shelby Good

Shelby Good is an Assistant Poetry Editor of The Broken Plate. They are a senior English major with a concentration in Creative Writing. In this post, Shelby provides commentary on JB Bilbrey’s piece “A Microsome of Married Life: The Grocery List,” which was previously published in our 2019 issue of The…

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Commentary on “A Simple Exchange” by Judith Grissmer from TBP 2018, Part Two

Posted on December 21, 2020March 13, 2025 By Emily Helmer

Emily Helmer is an Assistant Nonfiction Editor of The Broken Plate 2021. She is a senior English major with a Creative Writing concentration at Ball State University. In this post, Emily provides commentary on Judith Grissmer’s poem “A Simple Exchange,” which was previously published in our 2018 issue of The Broken…

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Commentary on “Bottle” by Allison Tunstall from TBP 2017

Posted on December 8, 2020March 13, 2025 By Grace Goze

Grace Goze is a Design Editor for The Broken Plate 2021. She is a senior Creative Writing major at Ball State University with minors in French and History.  In this post, Grace provides commentary on Allison Tunstall’s prose piece “Bottle,” which was previously published in our 2017 issue of The…

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Commentary on “Marlboro” by Hannah Gage from TBP 2020

Posted on December 6, 2020March 13, 2025 By Nicole Thomas

Nicole Thomas is the Associate Nonfiction Editor of The Broken Plate 2021. She is a senior magazine media journalism major with minors in French and creative writing. In this post, Nicole provides commentary on Hannah Gage’s hybrid work “Marlboro,” which was previously published in our most recent 2020 issue of…

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Commentary on “A Simple Exchange” by Judith Grissmer from TBP 2018, Part One

Posted on December 2, 2020March 13, 2025 By Tauri Hagemann

Tauri Hagemann is an Assistant Poetry Editor for The Broken Plate 2021. She is a junior English major with a concentration in creative writing at Ball State University. She also has a Spanish minor and is a member of the Honors College. In this post, Tauri provides commentary on Judith Grissmer’s…

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Commentary on “Doughnuts” by Kimmi Beard from TBP 2018

Posted on November 15, 2020March 13, 2025 By Molly Goebel

Molly Goebel is an Assistant Nonfiction Editor of The Broken Plate 2021. She is a junior Sociology major with a double minor in Creative Writing as well as Professional Writing and Emerging Media. In this post, Molly provides commentary on Kimmi Beard’s nonfiction work “Doughnuts,” which was previously published in our 2018…

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Commentary on “can ladies kill?” by Kyli Brown from TBP 2020

Posted on November 11, 2020March 13, 2025 By Emma Teague

Emma Teague is the Associate Fiction Editor of The Broken Plate 2021. She is a senior English Creative Writing major with a minor in Classics at Ball State University. In this post, Emma provides commentary on Kyli Brown’s poem “can ladies kill?” which was previously published in our most recent 2020 issue…

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Commentary on “Another Boyman Shouts ‘Faggot’ at Me from His Car” by Levi Todd from TBP 2018

Posted on November 9, 2020March 13, 2025 By Ashley Burns

Ashley Burns is the Assistant Managing Editor of The Broken Plate 2021. She is currently majoring in English Literature and minoring in Marketing and Professional Writing and Emerging Media. In this post, Ashley provides commentary on Levi Todd’s poem “Another Boyman Shouts ‘Faggot’ at Me from His Car,” which was…

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Commentary on “I Don’t Remember the Summer When Michael Jackson Died” from TBP 2020

Posted on November 2, 2020March 13, 2025 By Kelsey Enlow

Kelsey Enlow is a Design Editor for The Broken Plate 2021 and a senior Creative Writing Major at Ball State University. In this post, Kelsey provides commentary on Mackenzie Diggs’ poem “I Don’t Remember the Summer When Michael Jackson Died,” which was previously published in our most recent 2020 issue…

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Commentary on “Dad’s Hip Fracture,” by Barbara Brooks from TBP 2020

Posted on October 20, 2020March 13, 2025 By Vincent Ramos-Niaves

  Vincent Ramos-Niaves is the current Managing Editor for The Broken Plate 2021. He is a senior English Literature major at Ball State University. In this post, Vinny provides insightful commentary on Barbara Brooks’ poem “Dad’s Hip Fracture,” which was previously published in our most recent 2020 issue of The Broken Plate….

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